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Chapter 153 I am very rich
"here."
As she spoke, Shanshan circled out another place.
"And here, there is a serious mistake."
Wei Jiayi immediately stopped typing on the keyboard and looked up at the big screen.
Shanshan pointed to the marked area and said, "Look here, this is what I just said, to highlight the villain's high IQ, right?"
Wei Jiayi nodded quickly.
Shanshan smiled and said, “But in fact, you didn’t show what the villain is strong at all.
A simple auction must be a back-and-forth affair.
The top-quality item almost fell into the hands of the villain.
This not only fails to show that the villain has a high IQ.
Instead, it will make readers feel that the author is mentally retarded.
According to what you wrote before, the heroine's current net worth makes her one of the richest people in the country.
Want something and have to go through an auction?
Just buy it and spend the money and it's done.
Or we can participate in the auction, or we can fight the villains back and forth.
But the character of the heroine is that I am very rich.
You can compete with me for it, but I won’t panic at all and will always offer just one higher price.
The most important thing is not the process, but the confidence of the heroine during the auction and the fact that her opponents do not know her true strength.
Give readers an information gap.
This is the only way to feel refreshed.
What you want to highlight is the heroine's wealth and confidence.
You're so fucking rich, why would you still worry about the price of an item during an auction?
And for the villain, you can also add a very high level of style.
This is appropriate.”
Wei Jiayi suddenly understood.
He looked at Wang Shan with surprise, and his voice was a little sharp.
“As expected of my favorite author, so insightful!! I just feel like there is something wrong with what is written here.
But I can’t see what the problem is.”
Qian Duo looked at her excited face and laughed.
"You see, it makes sense right away. If the villain's character is a little more full-bodied, it can also add brilliance to the protagonist.
Sometimes, many readers will empathize with the villain.
The same goes for skits.
The villains are also important.
I have almost finished reading your novel.
The character of the heroine and her best friend is actually pretty good.
But the villains aren't well-developed.
This makes it difficult to give readers a real sense of immersion, and the excitement is only temporary and then gone.
What we want to give the audience is a continuous desire to watch.
I think all the villains in the early part of the novel need to be reshaped.
Some characters appear out of nowhere.
Most of them appear for the sake of the plot.”
Wei Jiayi typed quickly, writing down everything they said.
These are all suggestions given by our predecessors.
It is teaching that money cannot buy.
Su Meng also listened very carefully.
It’s full of useful information!!
After saying this, Shanshan closed the folder directly.
"Let's just start from the beginning. It will only take a few hours to come up with an overall outline.
I also read this book overnight.
I have seen your updated content.
I already have the basic outline of the skit in my mind.”
As she spoke, she opened the file that Qian Duo sent in the group.
“This is the simple outline I made overnight. We’ll make changes as we go through the plot.
After the revision is completed, it will be the most basic outline.
Subsequent modifications are based on this.”
Qian Duo smiled and said, “Then from now on, the authority will be fully handed over to you and Jiayi.
Sister Meng and I will listen to you."
After saying that, everyone turned their attention to the investor Su Meng.
Of course Su Meng agreed.
“I don’t understand this, I only look at the finished product.
Just look at the revised basic script and see if it makes me feel good.
As for the rest, you can discuss it among yourselves.”
With Su Meng's words, the three of them felt completely relieved.
Su Meng glanced at Wan Rourou who was sitting in the corner looking at her phone, then looked away.
"Jiayi, let me talk and you write, okay?"
Wei Jiayi made an OK gesture.
"Then let's start with the first episode."
“The heroine accidentally obtained the system. This accident needs to be slightly changed so that it can’t be too cliché.
Your car accident can be completely thrown away.
It can be changed to...the heroine gets sick and obtains the ultimate survival system.
In this way, can we lay a foreshadowing for the audience?
Some people are still looking forward to when the heroine will get better.
And then next....”
"..."
"..."
Shanshan talked about the plot of ten episodes in one breath.
Su Meng had no idea how the plot would turn out.
But at this moment, she is really happy!!!
Although compared with her experience, there is still a little gap.
But if you put yourself in the shoes of the heroine in the novel, it still makes your scalp tingle with pleasure.
When I read the original novel, many of the plots were just average.
Can read on.
But after it was changed into a short drama, the enjoyment level increased dramatically.
“The plot of the first ten episodes is roughly like this, with a small climax in each episode, which makes the audience unable to stop.
Qian Duoduo, for this short drama, how many episodes should we start charging for?"
Qian Duo was silent for a moment, thinking carefully: "About ten episodes, this is how short dramas are charged now."
Shanshan nodded in understanding: "That's about right, then I'll put a big hook in the tenth episode."
Wei Jiayi stopped typing on the keyboard.
"So now, should we move the following plot forward?"
After hearing her words, Shanshan circled a large paragraph of text.
“This part is actually not very meaningful, it can be shortened directly and the subsequent plot can be brought to the front.
Let the audience be willing to pay first.”
Wei Jiayi quickly wrote it down.
Shanshan glanced at him and said, "You don't need to remember these, they are all in your mind.
Learn more, watch more, practice more!!
Create a visual image in your mind.
Just write it down as you feel.”
"Master, the meal is ready. You can eat anytime."
Su Meng glanced at the time.
It's already past twelve o'clock.
Before they knew it, they had been chatting for two hours.
Su Meng didn’t know whether others understood or not.
Anyway, she understood.
She is quite confident now.
You can even say: Give me a pen and I can write a new script right away!
"Okay, let's stop here for now and go eat first."
"Take a break in the afternoon, and then we'll continue."
Since Su Meng had spoken, the others naturally had no objection.
Qian Duo stood up and stretched: "Sister Meng, do you want to sit in on the class this afternoon?"
This question hit the nail on the head for Su Meng.
Of course, I don’t really want to hear it.
It's so painful to keep listening to them talking there!
"It depends on the situation. Are you going to stay here this afternoon, or go back to the hotel?"
Shanshan understood immediately: "Sister Meng is watching you.
If you want to continue reading the script, then we'll stay here.
If you need anything else, we can go back to the hotel.”
Auntie has already placed all the prepared meals on the round table in the hall.
At first glance, it's full.
“It’s so rich!”
“It smells so good!”
“We have both Chinese and Western food~”
A few people came out and saw the table full of food, and couldn't help but exclaim.
“You can wash your hands here.”
There is a dedicated extra-large washbasin in the lobby on the first floor.
The restrooms are also divided into men's and women's.
Su Meng took a few people over there.
The three housekeeping ladies left after cooking.
Su Meng only ordered one meal.
The kitchen has been completely cleaned up.
Take away all the garbage too.
As for the rest, I can just tidy them up after dinner and put them in the dishwasher.
It was a very enjoyable meal.
Shanshan and Wei Jiayi have been discussing the next plot of the script.
Su Meng discussed with Qian Duo the issue of the makeup team.